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I have to write an article about a girl in my journalism class, I know its not really good right now but what can I do to make it better?

Getting your finger stuck in exercise equipment isn’t the best way to spend 7 hours of your day. But that’s exactly what happened to high school senior Susie Smith.

The paramedics had to come to saw if off, but they didn’t have a saw. So they ran to the neighbors, and sawed the metal bar until it was just a chunk that was stuck to her finger.

Floss was then wrapped around Smith’s finger to numb it while they finally removed the metal bar. Not your average most embarrassing moment.

Baxter lived in texas when she was young, and had been to Sea World well over 10 times, and has “The MOST adorable nephew in the world”.

“Walk the line” Is definitely Smiths’s favorite movie, she has seen it 32 times, and counting.

“Walk the line” is what inspired Smith to start playing guitar. She has played for 3 years, and her favorite song is “Here Comes the Sun” by the Beatles.

“I’m obsessed with the Beatles, no actually I’m obsessed with London.”Smith says with a smile.

Living in London has always been a dream of hers, and the one month visit next summer isn’t going to be enough.

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